First attempt at this style — be kind from this weekend

Rapid Noodle · 8 likes

Really good advice, and it feels doable. I noticed the same thing in Toronto.

Marco Conti · 2 likes

Amazing how much difference one small change can make. Honestly, the simplest version wins for me.

Urban Sparrow · 1 likes

This comment has main-character footnote energy.

Miguel Santos · 1 likes

I think both things can be true.

Camila Rocha · 1 likes

The framing feels off to me. Not terrible, just not convincing. A little friction removed goes a long way. The texture and mood are lovely.

Paper Coder · 2 likes

My wallet felt that.

Sleepy Comet · 1 likes

Kind of wild how often lovely is the whole issue.

Ananya Rao · 1 likes

I had the same reaction to terrible.

Aarav Sharma · 0 likes

I had the same reaction to removed.

Mango Panda · 1 likes

I am saving this for the next time I overthink style. The Warsaw example makes it feel concrete.

Chloe Davis · 1 likes

The framing feels off to me. Not terrible, just not convincing. That is where the boring checklist helps. Process photos would be fun to see.

Midnight Panda · 0 likes

Glad you shared it; small wins count. I would write it down before changing anything else. Great use of light and restraint.

Jan Nowak · 0 likes

This made me smile more than expected.

Kabir Khan · 0 likes

I love this. It feels practical without pretending life is neat. That is the kind of detail beginners miss.