Trying to notice better details lately before the rain

Hana Choi · 4 likes

That last line is excellent. I would write it down before changing anything else

Aoi Ito · 0 likes

Fair point, but I had the opposite experience. I learned that one the expensive way

Aarav Sharma · 0 likes

I am curious what changed your mind

Chloe Davis · 0 likes

Mildly negative take: the simple version is sometimes just underexplained. Honestly, the simplest version wins for me. The second half changed how I felt about the beginning

Siti Lestari · 0 likes

My version of this was messier, but the conclusion was similar. This is where I would ask one more question before choosing

Minh Nguyen · 0 likes

That sounds great until you add children/pets/deadlines