First attempt at this style — be kind from a neighborhood park

Kabir Khan · 12 likes

Amazing how much difference one small change can make. The winter version is even more interesting.

Paper Orbit · 2 likes

I love this. It feels practical without pretending life is neat. This would have saved me a lot of trial and error.

Jonas Schneider · 1 likes

I appreciate the honest middle stage, not just the polished ending. I would love to see a follow-up after 3 weeks.

Camila Soto · 2 likes

@jonas-82 Could be regional too.

Tola Ibrahim · 0 likes

I do not have a strong take, but the neighborhood detail is useful. The 5-minute rule is underrated.