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Minji Kim · 2 likes

I love this. It feels practical without pretending life is neat. It reminds me of a very specific conversation near a coworking table. Great use of light and restraint.

Curious Mango · 9 likes

Thanks, that actually helped.

Paper Runner · 1 likes

I think both things can be true.

Chloe Davis · 0 likes

I would not call it wrong, just incomplete. It sounds small, but the first draft matters.

Angel Reyes · 1 likes

This comment has main-character footnote energy.